Editing Services
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Now Accepting projects for July & August 2026
Full Developmental Edit
Big-picture analysis (structure, pacing, plot, character arcs, stakes)
Scene-level commentary
Thematic cohesion feedback
Market positioning insight
8–15 page editorial letter
In-manuscript comments throughout
Full Developmental Script Edit
Comprehensive editorial letter
Story structure and pacing analysis
Character and relationship dynamics review
Dialogue and subtext evaluation
Scene-by-scene developmental feedback
First Chapter Critique (Basic)
In-line comments throughout chapter
Reader-reaction feedback
Notes on pacing and clarity
Character introduction assessment
Suggestions for strengthening the opening
Synopsis Critique
Structural analysis of synopsis
Clarity and narrative flow feedback
Stakes and conflict evaluation
Pacing and readability notes
Revision suggestions for stronger impact
Manuscript Evaluation
A comprehensive editorial letter
Big-picture feedback on structure and pacing
Character arc and plot analysis
Identification of strengths and opportunities
Clear revision roadmap
Editorial Roadmap
Core strengths and weaknesses identified
Top revision priorities outlined
Structural recommendations
Character arc refinement suggestions
Strategic plan for future revisions
Reader Experience Beta (Tier I)
In-line comments throughout manuscript
Reader-reaction insights and impressions
Notes on pacing and engagement
Identification of confusion points
1-2 page summary of key takeaways
First Chapter Critique (Premium)
In-line comments throughout chapter
3-6 page editorial letter
Hook and opening analysis
Character and tension evaluation
Actionable revision recommendations
Query Letter Review
Query structure evaluation
Hook strength feedback
Market positioning guidance
Revision recommendations
Optional comp title suggestions
Story Diagnostic
Review of 3-5 chapters
Focused feedback on story foundations
Identification of recurring craft issues
Actionable next steps for revision
Ideal for works-in-progress
Developmental Script Feedback (Feature or Pilot)
Story Structure and pacing analysis
Character and emotional arc feedback
Scene effectiveness evaluation
Dialogue and subtext review
Tension, stakes, and momentum assessment
Craft Focused Beta Read (Tier II)
In-line comments throughout manuscript
Character arc feedback
Pacing and structural observations
Thematic cohesion notes
Representation considerations where relevant
First Three Chapters Critique
In-line comments throughout chapters
Opening hook analysis
Character introduction feedback
Pacing and engagement notes
Suggestions for strengthening the opening
Targeted Developmental Feedback
Inline comments throughout pages
Focus on a specific craft concern
Editorial letter with recommendations
Strengths and opportunities analysis
Actionable revision guidance
Targeted Developmental Feedback (Short Script)
Character arc and emotional progression
Tension, conflict, and payoff analysis
Scene purpose evaluation
Dialogue and subtext feedback
Clear revision recommendations
Intensive Developmental Beta (Tier III)
In-line comments throughout manuscript
Deep character and theme analysis
Structural and emotional arc review
Nuanced craft-focused feedback
30-minute consultation call included
Outline Evaluation
Story structure analysis
Character arc evaluation
Stakes and conflict assessment
Identification of structural weaknesses
Suggestions for strengthening plot trajectory