Targeted Developmental Feedback

Focused developmental feedback designed to address a specific challenge in your manuscript. Whether you're struggling with pacing, character development, dialogue, emotional tension, or another craft concern, this service provides targeted guidance where you need it most.

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  • Targeted Developmental Feedback is a focused critique centered on a specific aspect of your manuscript.

    Rather than evaluating every element of the story, this service allows us to dive deeply into one area of concern and provide actionable recommendations for improvement.

    This is ideal for writers seeking expert guidance on a particular craft challenge without investing in a full manuscript review.

  • This service is ideal for authors who:

    • Are struggling with a specific craft issue

    • Are seeking focused developmental feedback

    • Are preparing for a larger revision

    • Are looking for professional insight on a particular concern

    • Don't need a full manuscript evaluation

  • Choose one or more focus areas, including:

    • Character development

    • Pacing and momentum

    • Dialogue and subtext

    • Emotional tension

    • Stakes and conflict

    • Point of view

    • Scene structure

    • Relationship dynamics

    • Show vs. tell

    • Worldbuilding

    • Focused developmental analysis

    • In-line comments throughout submitted pages

    • Craft-specific recommendations

    • Identification of strengths and opportunities

    • Actionable revision suggestions

    • Personalized feedback tailored to your goals

  • Custom quoted based on manuscript length.

    Current rate: $0.022 per word

    Turnaround times vary based on manuscript length and current availability.

    Payment plans available for larger projects.

  • How is this different from a Story Diagnostic?

    A Story Diagnostic evaluates the overall health of your story and identifies broad developmental concerns. Targeted Developmental Feedback focuses on one specific craft area and provides deeper analysis within that area.

    Do I need a completed manuscript?

    No. This service works well for both completed manuscripts and works-in-progress.

    What if I'm struggling with more than one issue?

    If multiple concerns are affecting the manuscript, a Story Diagnostic or Manuscript Evaluation may provide more comprehensive guidance.

    Can I request feedback on a specific scene or chapter?

    Absolutely. Many writers use this service to workshop scenes, chapters, character arcs, or specific problem areas.