Story Consulting

Developmental Support While You Write!

You don't have to finish your entire manuscript before getting professional developmental support.

Story Consulting is designed for authors who want an ongoing editorial relationship throughout the writing and revision process. Instead of submitting a completed novel for one large developmental edit, we'll work through your story in manageable sections—giving you the opportunity to identify structural issues, strengthen character arcs, troubleshoot scenes, and make intentional decisions as your manuscript develops.

This may be for you if you…

  • Have been stuck on a chapter for weeks

  • Have too many ideas and are struggling to organize them

  • Want feedback before writing another 50k words

  • Need help deciding between different directions

  • Want regular professional eyes on the manuscript

How it Works:

Authors submit approximately 10,000–15,000 words at a time, and I provide developmental feedback based on whatever they're currently trying to solve. Rather than treating each submission as an isolated critique, I’m maintaining familiarity with the project so the feedback can build upon previous sessions.

What You’ll Receive:

Developmental feedback tailored to the questions and challenges you're currently navigating, with focused notes on areas such as character development, structure, pacing, scene execution, emotional arcs, and story direction. Because I remain familiar with your manuscript across rounds, each session can build upon our previous work rather than treating every submission as an isolated critique.

Expected Deliverables:

  • Developmental review focused on the author's current concerns

  • Inline comments on the submitted pages where necessary

  • A concise written feedback summary/consulting notes

  • One post-feedback email consultation for questions, clarification, and discussing next steps

    Note: The above deliverables are per editing round. Booking multiple rounds is accepted and encouraged!

When you're ready for more support, simply book your next round and we'll continue building from the work we've already done together.

Pricing:

Pricing is based on a flat rate of $0.022/word rather than a monthly retainer to ensure author control of scope and frequency of feedback.

  • 10,000 words - $220

  • 12,000 words - $264

  • 15,000 words - $330

You don't have to figure out the rest of your manuscript alone.

Whether you're stuck on your next chapter or looking for consistent developmental guidance as your story grows, I'd love to hear what you're working on.