Targeted Developmental Feedback
Focused feedback on the areas you need most.
What This Is:
A customized feedback service where I focus specifically on the elements of your story that you’re struggling with.
Areas of Focus:
(Customized based on your needs)
— Pacing
— Character Depth
— Story Structure
— World-building
What You’ll Receive:
— A 2–4 page editorial letter addressing the targeted concern(s)
— In-line comments throughout the submitted pages
— Analysis of strengths and areas for improvement
— Actionable suggestions to guide revision
Who This Is For:
— Writers with specific questions
— Writers stuck in revision
— Writers needing clarity on one element
Investment:
$0.022/word
Final pricing is customized based on your manuscript and project needs.