Flat Rate Services

Not every project needs a full edit. These smaller, focused services are designed to help you strengthen specific areas of your writing—from your opening chapters to your query materials—with clear, actionable feedback.

First Chapter Critique (Standard)

  • In-line comments throughout the chapter.

  • Feedback and reaction from a professional developmental editor.

  • Notes on pacing, clarity, dialogue, and character introduction.

  • Suggestions for strengthening the opening hook.

Word Count Limit: up to 3,500 words.

Note: word count beyond the limit may incur an additional fee.

$105

First Chapter Developmental Critique (Premium)

  • In-line comments

  • 3–6 page editorial letter

  • Hook and opening analysis

  • Character introduction feedback

  • Pacing and tension evaluation

  • Developmental suggestions for revision

Word Count Limit: up to 5,000 words.

Note: word count beyond the limit may incur an additional fee.

$200

Chapter Critique (Single or Multiple)

  • Developmental feedback

  • Character & tension evaluation

  • In-text comments as needed

  • 2–5 page summary letter

Word Count Limit: up to 3,500 words per chapter.

Note: word count beyond the limit may incur an additional fee.

$150

($95 per chapter for 3+ chapters)

First Three Chapters Critique

  • In-line comments throughout the chapters

  • Feedback on opening hook

  • Character introduction analysis

  • Pacing and engagement notes

  • Identification of confusing sections

  • Suggestions for strengthening the opening of the manuscript

Word Count Limit: up to 10,000 words.

Note: word count beyond the limit may incur an additional fee.

$295

Outline Evaluation

  • 2–3 page editorial letter

  • Analysis of story structure and narrative arc

  • Feedback on stakes, conflict, and pacing

  • Identification of plot holes or structural weaknesses

  • Suggestions for strengthening the plot trajectory

Word Count Limit: up to 5,000 words.

Note: word count beyond the limit may incur an additional fee.

$175

Query Letter Review

  • Structural analysis of query

  • Hook strength feedback

  • Market positioning refinement

  • Up to 2 rounds of revision feedback

  • Optional comp title suggestions

Word Count Limit: standard query length (up to 500 words).

Note: word count beyond the limit may incur an additional fee.

$110

Synopsis Critique

  • In-line comments

  • Structural feedback

  • Notes on clarity and narrative flow

  • Feedback on stakes and conflict

  • Suggestions for improving pacing and readability

Word Count Limit: up to 1,500 words.

Note: word count beyond the limit may incur an additional fee.

$150

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